Nancy Coffelt: Listen
Nov
28
categories : Review
Title: Listen
Author: Nancy Coffelt
Genre: Young Adult
Publisher: WestSide Books
Source: Review Copy Provided by Author
Parental Warning: child abuse, mental illness, criminal activity
Summary:
Carrie, Kurt, and Will each carry with them a uniquely tragic history. All victims of either physical and mental abuse or mental illness the threesome find themselves tangled in each other’s lives in ways that showcase the struggle to accept and rebuild.
Kurt is a surly young man victimized by his mother’s abusive boyfriend while she did little to help and protect him. He is intelligent and longs for acceptance and love, primarily from his long lost father. Hopeful to be reunited with one and the same he takes on a job rescuing abused animals. Or so he thinks.
Employing Kurt is Carrie, a middle aged woman who lives with a bevy of strange animals. She’s suffering from a serious mental illness that has her hearing these same animals speak. As an extension of that ability she pays Kurt to save more animals she perceives to be abused and bring them to live in her dilapidated house. Unfortunately she takes this mission to save the unfortunate a bit too far when it starts to creep it’s way into the human realm.
Will has been on his own since the death of his mother and the incarceration of his addict prone brother. Though he is tied to Kurt via his job as a school tutor he’s most focused on trying to forge a relationship with Claire. Soft spoken and timid by nature he is happy when that romantic entanglement begins to form. Trying to be all things to all people his relationship with her is destroyed when he is the one to discover that Kurt has gotten more than he bargained for in his job with Carrie.
As their three lives continue to weave together revelations and discoveries are made that change not only their lives but the lives of friends, family and the community around them.
Opinion:
I’m going to start off saying that I really wanted to find something positive to say about this book but honestly I can’t. What didn’t I like about this story? Though I’ve never been a fan of child abuse and/or mental illness stories it wasn’t the fact that Listen was darker than the average young adult novel I’ve read. It was the fact that there was so much going on that it actually felt manic. There was the aforementioned child abuse and mental illness but I’ll also add in animal abuse, abandonment, drug & alcohol abuse and multiple instances of criminal activity for good measure. I mean I know that generally speaking, in real life, most times all of the above go hand in hand but man oh man it was a lot to read in a short book of just over two hundred pages.
Now maybe that was the point, maybe the reader was supposed to feel that nervous high strung feeling the characters were but really I didn’t like it. I would have much rather have seen an in depth story about one of the characters compared to skimming the surface of three. Again, it was just way too much.
At times, I struggled with the need for Will in this story. The relationship between Carrie and Kurt made sense, but Will, he was clearly there more for progression of their story than anything else. Making him a victim of abuse didn’t add to the story at all in fact it just made it one more thing on top of all the rest. In fact, I honestly found myself confusing Kurt and Will’s stories at times because they were so similar.
As it relates to the above, I believe part of the reason I struggled with confusion of these two characters is that for a good portion of the book all three stories were jumping back and forth. We’d get several pages of Will then several of Kurt then Carrie. It was very disjointed and many times the transitions were so abrupt I was left wondering why we stopped the one story to go to the other. Admittedly it seemed that once the story got to a crescendo and the three characters were interacting in real time in the same scenes I was able to better transition and follow what was going on.
Finally, one last obstacle I struggled to navigate was the fact that the story was extremely depressing. There were no light hearted moments at all, which makes sense given the subject matter I suppose, but honestly for me I need that break here and there. I need something to keep me hopeful that in the end it will all be alright. The small attempt at doing so (Will’s desire to be Claire’s boyfriend) fell flat for me and was honestly more of an attempt to tie Will in with Carrie’s story. It did so effectively I guess but still, I would have enjoyed something uplifting and remotely happy somewhere.
In the end, I imagine the author was trying to paint a realistic picture of how mental illness and abuse affects not only the lives of those who carry it with them but also those around them. In that regard I do think the story was in a way successful. I certainly felt anxiety and stress and discomfort I imagine that family and friends of sufferers must endure on a daily basis.







Kathy:
Yikes, that sounds like too much for me. I think I’ll skip it. Thanks for the review.
November 28, 2009 at 9:28 pm
Heather:
I’m with Kathy. That sounds like a really hard to read book. You wrote a great review of it.
November 29, 2009 at 6:37 am
Jerry Fenter:
I have been a full time artist and writer for the past 20 years. Prior to that I devoted all of my time to working with young adults in difficult situations. I worked as a teacher inside Multnomah County Juvenile Court in Portland, Oregon. I also worked in a locked situation with runaway girls as a teacher and counselor. I was a director of a school for learning disabled teens at Jesuit High School in Portland, Oregon. Most of my life, even as an artist, has been involved with young adults and their fears, concerns, obsessions and joy. I know their reality. I think your review of Listen by Nancy Coffelt can be called very naive at the least. If you knew about what many young adults have been through or teens that have friends who have led very difficult lives, I think you would react very differently to this exceptional book. Ms. Coffelt has combined her experience, humor and writing talent to give the young adult reader something REAL. Contrary to your belief that touching on these realistic subjects should scare away readers, I think readers will be caught up in the story and will easily be able to follow the interesting characters throughout the book. Many will identify with the characters and others will be able to relate. You are selling short the intellect and sensitivity of young adult readers. The world isn’t always rosy with a happy ending. We know this. Teens know this. You might want to read Girl Interrupted, a book that is very popular among teens. Most people are more complicated than a tight half an hour story from a tv sitcom. Happy ending, no darkness, no problems…teenagers aren’t fooled by this. They are learning to be adults and need to know that we live in a complicated world that is not always going to be easy. It’s from this they learn compassion.
December 1, 2009 at 1:29 pm
Michelle:
Jerry, I usually don’t reply in my own comments but feel the need to address a couple of the issues you outline in your comment above. First, I don’t need to hear your vast credentials in order for you to justify your opinion of my review. Just as I’m entitled to have my opinion of what I read you’re entitled to your thoughts as well. In fact, if you’d like to measure my credentials against the review I’ll throw them out there so you’re aware. I am a long time survivor who has been victimized by drug/alcohol addiction, emotional abuse and mental illness myself. Further I live with a teen who was born addicted to drugs as a result of her mother’s abuse and who now has more than her share of emotional problems herself. So in a nutshell, I’m not quite as naive as you presume me to be.
Second I’m unsure where in my review I called the subject matter unrealistic. My comments centered around the vast amount of realism being overwhelming for me as a reader and my preferences for the type of story I enjoy. If that scares readers away then perhaps they aren’t Ms. Coffelt’s target audience to begin with. I would be more than happy for teens (or anyone really) who find a story of this nature interesting and enjoyable to read it and learn from it. It did not, however suit my taste and I’ve expressed that.
Thank you for your thoughtful comment hopefully you and Ms. Coffelt will find better success with further reviews.
December 1, 2009 at 1:56 pm
Eden Rosa:
Jerry, you’re so right. Look what School Library Journal said–and I think they’re a better judge:
COFFELT, Nancy. Listen. 214p. WestSide. 2009. Tr $16.95. ISBN 978-1-934813-07-2. LC number unavailable.
Gr 8 Up—Will, 18, has been on his own ever since his mom died and his older brother, a drug addict responsible for her death, was sent to jail. He tutors Kurt, a 14-year-old who, unbeknownst to him, is similarly troubled. Kurt has been living with his grandmother since he stabbed his mother’s abusive boyfriend in self-defense. He wants to find his dad in Minneapolis, and needs money for a bus ticket to get there. When middle-aged schizophrenic Carrie offers to pay him 40 dollars for every stray cat or dog he delivers to her as part of her misguided scheme to “save” mistreated or ignored pets, Kurt jumps at the opportunity. Coffelt aptly weaves together a narrative from these three distinct points of view. The characters’ actions lead them to an intense collision after Carrie “saves”/kidnaps an infant and brings him to live in her filthy house. In showing Will’s self-doubt regarding his burgeoning relationship with his crush, Claire, and Kurt’s anguished flashbacks to abuse at the hands of his mother’s boyfriend, the author displays a deep understanding of the teenage male psyche. Themes of loss and forgiveness add poignancy to the story without ever seeming heavy-handed. This short, action-filled book holds immense appeal for reluctant readers, and the rich characterization of Carrie’s cats and dogs may pique the interest of animal lovers.—Jennifer Barnes, Homewood Library, IL
December 1, 2009 at 1:58 pm
Jen - Devourer of Books:
Thanks for the review. This sounds pretty interesting to me, but I know quite a few people who wouldn’t be able to handle such a consistently unhappy book, so it is very helpful to hear your thoughts. Much more happy than, say, the statement the School Library Journal made about the book, which is really more of a summary than a review.
December 1, 2009 at 2:06 pm
Jen - Devourer of Books:
Erg, should have been ‘much more helpful,’ not ‘happy’
December 1, 2009 at 2:09 pm
Aarti:
I am glad we get two sides of the discussion in this review and the comments- from you on the negative aspects, and from various commenters on the positive aspects. I will probably give this one a miss.
December 1, 2009 at 2:15 pm
Nicole:
I love reading books wit the heavier topics but I can understand that some of them can be a little bit crushing. I read something similar to this earlier in the year and while it was accurate and true to life it was incredibly unrelenting and difficult. I think I am still healing from that one so I definitely think I will be waiting on this one.
FTR, I aslo think your review is just as worthy as the summary, an opinion is an opinion and ultimately I have to be the one to take chances as I see fit and choose to read what will work for me.
December 1, 2009 at 2:21 pm
sherry (nite swimming):
Thanks for such a thorough review. This sounds like an interesting book for young readers — a break from vampire-ridden fantasy. Variety is the spice of life.
December 1, 2009 at 2:26 pm
Michelle:
Sherry – I agree, what may not work for me may very well work for others.
December 1, 2009 at 2:34 pm