categories : Review
Title: Merlin’s Harp
Author: Anne Eliot Crompton
Genre: Young Adult Fiction, Fantasy
Publisher: Sourcebooks Fire
Source: Provided by Publisher
Parental Warning: Sexuality, Battle Violence
“We walked the sky, halfway to the Flowering Moon. Far below us, two statue-quiet figures faced once another on a high earth rampart. Below them on one side stretched earth, Goddess-lovely, clothed in silver night; on the other side Human bodies walked, made love, fought, ate or slept; Human spirits hovered like shining bees over clover, some in the flowers and some slightly above. A very few stood with us in the sky, like distant stars. The nearest of these I thought might be Merlin.”
Summary:
Nivienne is of the Fey, living her life across two worlds. The first, her home, filled with fairy and mystical creatures provides her happiness and a degree of solitude she longingly hopes to embrace for the remainder of her life. The second, the land of humans, where pain and sacrifice took hold of the people whom she loved most.
A prodigy of Merlin, Nivienne travels with him between her beloved Avalon to the land of King Arthur in order to assist in various intrigues to keep the Peace. Having lost the only child she’d ever born, endured her brother’s departure from their home, and losing the only man she could see herself connected to she felt no true allegiance to love. Until one day in the throws of palace intrigue she finds her heart suddenly beating again; she finds that in keeping the Peace she could find happiness. Now she sets out to help save not only Arthur’s land but her own as well.
Opinion:
Touted as a new and different interpretation of Arthurian legend I thought perhaps this book would be a good bridge into fantasy for a reader somewhat interested in exploring the genre. Unfortunately it fell short in that regard. It was such a tough read that it did more to turn me off the genre than on.
The flowery and excessive prose made it, at times, difficult to follow. I never really got a clear picture of what either land looked like. Apple Valley (ie: Avalon) was slightly more vivid than Arthur’s kingdom but all things considered the characters hopped so quickly between different settings it was tough to grasp on to any sense of place or time. Speaking of which, I had no idea if we were in the present or the past or seeing some sort of Fey vision of the future.
Not having read much in this genre or much in the way of Arthurian literature some of the intricacies were lost on me. However, I will say I found some of the characterizations and relationships developed to have quite a bit of potential. I would really have enjoyed seeing more of Lugh and the Fey girl he’d left behind. I actually found that element of the story (while extremely short lived) quite compelling. Heck I would have chucked the whole Arthurian aspect to just focus on that part of the story entirely.
In the end, what I take away from having read this book is that this type of fantasy isn’t for me. Perhaps lovers of the genre will read it and find it’s strengths, I would certainly enjoy hearing a different perspective.
[This review is part of a blog tour arranged by Sourcebooks Fire where you can view a list of the participating blogs]







bermudaonion (Kathy):
Thanks for your honest review. I don’t think this book is for me, either.
March 13, 2010 at 6:27 am
Sheila DeChantal:
I agree. I too read and reviewed this book and didn’t find it to be what I was hoping for. I was at times confused as to what was happening and found it a book I really had to work to get through.
I have enjoyed other books in this genre .
March 13, 2010 at 6:33 am
Michelle:
Such a great premise. It’s too bad it didn’t work for you.
March 13, 2010 at 7:33 am
Freda:
I know this wasn’t for you, and I appreciate that, but based on what I read here in your post, I think I would really enjoy this book. I guess it is just one of those stories some love and some won’t.
Good, honest review!
March 13, 2010 at 10:42 am
Michelle:
Freda, I hope you do! If you get the opportunity to read it and enjoy it please let me know what worked for you. I’d enjoy hearing your thoughts.
March 13, 2010 at 10:44 am
Carrie K.:
This is getting such mixed reviews – I’m curious to read it to see what I think! Well-written, honest review. (And I’ve missed chatting on Twitter lately!)
March 14, 2010 at 12:23 am
Melissa (Book Nut):
Being a lover of all things Arthurian, I’ll probably read this one eventually. But… have you read Mary Stewart’s Merlin trilogy? If you haven’t, that’s really where you should start. That, and Song of the Sparrow by Lisa Ann Sandell. It’s about Elaine and in verse. It’s quite beautiful.
March 14, 2010 at 3:22 pm
Michelle:
I actually just picked up Song of the Sparrow this weekend to do a read along with Drea of Book Blather in April. I’m looking forward to it! I’ll have to add the others to my ever increasing TBR pile, haha.
March 14, 2010 at 3:27 pm
Pam:
I guess I am the only one so far that truly loved this book. I thought the prose was beautiful and the world building I guess for me was okay because of all the Arthurian / Avalon books I have read in the past.
March 15, 2010 at 2:17 pm
Jennifer:
Well, it sounds like an interesting story – and it’s based in very interesting mythology – but if it isn’t executed well, I can understand why you didn’t enjoy it. I think I’ll skip this one. Although I must admit that the cover is super cute and alluring.
March 15, 2010 at 10:43 pm
Nicole:
Jenn said some similar things in her review. I had picked it up and was looking for a reason to buy it, but after skimming a few pages,just couldn’t get into it.
March 17, 2010 at 5:51 am
Rebecca:
I just read Heather of Tales of a Capricious Reader’s review of this and she said the same thing. I went and read a few pages of the first chapter that is online and I already agreed that the writing was pretty flowery. I have enough trouble with focus and paying attention without unnecessary obstacles!
March 24, 2010 at 5:23 am