categories : Review, Series Spotlight
Series: Birthmarked
Author: Caragh O’Brien [website] [twitter] [facebook]
Genre: Dystopian
Publisher: Roaring Brook Press
Format: #1 – Hardcover, #2 eBook
Source: #1 – Purchased, #2 Publisher (ARC via Net Galley)
Reviewer: Michelle
Parental Advisory: violence, criminal activity
Teachable Moments: politics, free-will, loyalty, gender equality
Book Names:
1 – Birthmarked [indie bound] [amazon]
2 – Prized [indie bound] [amazon]
Plot:
<spoilers this way come! Because I’m reviewing two books at the same time it’s impossible not to let information flow. Beware!>
The Enclave is home to a powerful government oppressing those living outside the gates. Amongst the inhabitants of the many outlying villages are Gaia and her parents. Gaia’s mother, tasked with assisting in the birthing of healthy babies then delivering them to the Enclave, and her father are unexpectedly taken away one evening leaving Gaia alone to find out why. Taking over her mother’s place as midwife she takes the opportunity to ask members of her community what they may know. Then, one day, she is visited by the mysterious Captain Gray as he has been tasked with investigating her parents actions and behavior and reporting what he finds back to the Enclave. This leaves Gaia with more questions than answers . To find the answers Gaia goes undercover in the Enclave where she finds herself the focus of some serious political intrigue where survival is more than about just being the fittest. It’s about cracking codes, seeking the truth about her parents, rebellion against their oppressors and ultimately determination to make the world a better more fair place for everyone.
The result of her actions bring about the events in Prized. Gaia’s now focused on finding a place in the world outside of the Enclave. Carrying her newborn sister through the rugged terrain of The Wastelands she hopes to find a safe haven where they can go unnoticed and live free. Unfortunately she is drawn into a world that isn’t all that different than that of the Enclave. Being taken captive she and Maya are taking to Sylum a place where females are the ruling class. Though motivations are different the population here is about assuring that the human race is given a fighting chance. Arranged marriages, infertility, more baby selection drama, and all manner of feuding (family and otherwise) are what welcome Gaia when she arrives at Sylum. But she also encounters the potential for love. With Leon missing she meets brothers Will and Peter whom she has vary different attractions to.
Characters:
Gaia is, in Birthmarked, a strong and determined young lady. One who has clear visions of who she is and where she comes from. She fights injustice with her daring and courageous nature. Though not entirely fearless she puts the welfare of her family high above her own. She is a girl of action and is quick-thinking. Gaia suffers though, she misses the comfort of home and the love of her family. She’s vengeful of death and has a mean streak that works to her advantage. Caring of others, she even finds compassion for some in the Enclave that have been most oppressive of others. But then, in Prized, she loses some of her will. She loses some of her fire. She becomes more introverted and careful. All of which I found to be believable under the circumstances. Her experiences in the Enclave fundamentally changed her. Add to that, the responsibility she had in Prized was not just for herself but now for her infant sister as well. This resulted in Gaia becoming more conservative, far more cautious, and even subservient when needed. Many of these traits were against her nature but people do what they must to survive.
Leon (Gaia’s first love) remained fairly consistent throughout both Birthmarked and Prized. This is not to say his character was completely unchanged or under developed but rather what made him Leon continued to shine through in all circumstances. A man of honor, he consistently challenged those around him. Though he was, at times, a prisoner to his family and the reigning government of the Enclave he was subversive enough to fight for what he believed in. The strong silent type he was straightforward and of few words. He was courageous enough to take risks when necessary yet realistic enough to reserve himself when the situation called for it. Like Gaia, he knew how to love. He struggled with showing his emotions but once revealed he had such endearing tenderness.
The Matrarc of Sylum read as a giant cliche. I did appreciate that she wasn’t a faceless foe like the Enclave was in Birthmarked but still she was very predictable. A bitter and scorned old woman she was deadly and domineering. Her character did not feel fully fleshed out. I never completely understood her motivations. As the leader of Sylum she claimed to be working for the greater good of her people, and I did feel she was at times, but many of her actions felt far more personal which I never found reason for. She was certainly the most atrocious of Prized’s characters — not an ounce of compassion nor love. Her negative influence and desperation for control went to making me loath her (which I believe was the intention) but I would have liked to have seen some sort of emotion from her.
I thought there was great opportunity where Will and Peter (Prized’s brothers who were both attracted to Gaia) were concerned. Certainly there is room for them to develop as the last book progresses. I did find each of them interesting enough to keep me reading but I would like to see more of them independent of their desires for Gaia. Where Peter was the more law-abiding of the two Will wasn’t afraid to step outside the lines time and again. Will was softer spoken while Peter more abrupt. Will was emotional and tender while Peter was more gruff and stronger armed. Each of them had a compelling relationship with Gaia in their individual way.
There was also a variety of secondary characters throughout both, Gaia’s parents who were bold and strong, Leon’s family who were dark and overbearing, as well as a number of inhabitants in Sylum who both fueled Gaia’s fire of rebellion and assisted in oppressing her. All in all it was a fairly well rounded (though at times peripherally developed) cast.
Setting:
The setting of these books is just as much a star as the characters. It is a sparse land with serious environmental issues that cause any number of stressors for its inhabitants. It leads to infertility and desperation for food and water that naturally affects the behavior of people. A world that is easy to envision I could imagine the large-scale difference between the populated city of the Enclave, the lesser comfortable outlying burgs that surrounded it, the rigors and savagery of the Wastelands as well as the discomfort but safety of Sylum. There was community to be found in each, the populace carrying varying degrees of comfort. Of course this went to the availability of natural resources and the level of oppression experienced by governmental leaders. All in all O’Brien has crafted an interesting world that lends itself to be a good back drop for the action of the plot and the depth of characters being built.
Final Thoughts:
While I enjoyed Birthmarked more than Prized I feel invested in this story. I found O’Brien’s addition of the love “square” to be an interesting twist on the usual romantic fare. All the more impressive is the fact that Gaia was appealing with all of her suitors. She could find happiness with each of them for different reasons.
Further, the characters were differentiated enough to allow for more complex relationships (familial, romantic or friendship). Was that opportunity for complexity always taken? No, sadly it wasn’t. But there was enough there to build on for the final book which I’m very much looking forward to. I’m also quite looking forward to how the plots of Birthmarked and Prized are tied together (if they are). Will events from the Enclave to come back to haunt Gaia and Leon, if so how will it impact life in Sylum? There is a great deal of potential for the final book in the series.















